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Fix grammar and spelling issues - #254

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Check one:

  • Semantic Change: something about the meaning of the text is different
  • Non-semantic Change: Spelling, grammar, or formatting changes.

Summary of change(s):
Fixed grammar issues in 4.E.4, 4.E.6, and 9.B.
Also changed the wording of 5.A.1.A.2 for clarity.

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see questions
looks good aside from questions

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Are you interesting in fixing this PR and making it mergeable?

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Yes I will do that later tonight :) thanks for the reminder!

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Yes I will do that later tonight :) thanks for the reminder!

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Comment thread constitution.tex
The final proposal is presented the following week, and ballots are distributed for a Balloted Two-Thirds Vote with two-thirds quorum as described in \ref{Balloted Vote}.
If two or more modifications would conflict with one another, at the discretion of the Maintainers, ballots are distributed for a Balloted Vote with two-thirds quorum, and a winner is selected as described in \ref{Ranked Choice}.
The ballots are collected for a minimum of a forty-eight hour period.
The ballots are collected for a minimum of forty-eight hours.

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I actually don't like this sentence at all. This change is fine, but I think the sentence should be something like The voting period lasts at least forty-eight hours. That needs work as well, but it seems weird to say that ballots must be collected (continuously?) for a certain amount of time.

Comment thread constitution.tex
Active Members must participate in at least one major project.
Members are required to submit a description for this major project to E-Board for approval.
As an alternative to this requirement, members may instead assist on a large number of CSH activities and projects.
As an alternative to this requirement, members may instead assist with a large number of CSH activities and projects.

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contribute to

Comment thread constitution.tex
\item If E-Board decides through an E-board Vote not to present the nomination at a House Meeting, the selection process ends and the candidate does not become a member.
\item If the nomination is presented at a House Meeting for discussion, a Two-Thirds Vote with two-thirds quorum is held to determine whether the nomination is accepted.
Ballots are distributed and voting must remain open for a minimum of a forty-eight hour period.
Ballots are distributed and voting must remain open for a minimum of forty-eight hours.

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This one is fine, maybe copy this version above

Comment thread constitution.tex
The duties and responsibilities of an E-Board member on leave are assumed using the process defined in \ref{Appointment of an Interim Director} until the member returns from their leave.
If the member returns before the end of the Standard Operation Session in which they started their leave, they may assume their position and the interim director is removed. % someone gets their position back if they come back during the year for which they were elected
If any point the member's leave is determined by E-Board to be detrimental to be operations of House, any E-Board member may propose an E-Board Vote to require a resignation from the member.
If any point the member's leave is determined by E-Board to be detrimental to the operations of House, any E-Board member may propose an E-Board Vote to require a resignation from the member.

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Good, but also If at any point

Comment thread constitution.tex
\asubsubsection{Selection of the Chairperson, Evaluations Director, Social Director(s), Financial Director, House Improvements Director, History Director, Research and Development Director(s), Public Relations Director}
\begin{enumerate}
\item The opening of the E-Board position(s) is announced at a House Meeting and nominations for the position are taken for a minimum of a seventy-two hour period.
\item The opening of the E-Board position(s) is announced at a House Meeting and nominations for the position are taken for a minimum of seventy-two hours.

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I'm going to stop commenting, but make sure all the changes that look like this one are consistent.

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